Second Screening: Feedback

From my peers the feedback was much more positive than from the first screening but my piece still had a lot of work to be done on it before it even gets close to be considered 'good'. This is my first film so it is bound to be a process, for that reason I am sticking with a lot of what I have got and will try to improve upon these foundations. As said by my teacher, "loads of potential but dissapointing..."

Second Screening: Potential not yet harnessed

Second screening: New and improved but not perfect

First Draft: A disaster

Easy to say, our first drat didn't go too well. We were unable to capture a good enough amount of footage to present and give an accurate representation of where we wanted our project to go. Mainly due to actors not showing up at the desired film meets we essentially had no first draft, only about 28 seconds of foliage. None the less here it is: