Second Screening: Feedback

From my peers the feedback was much more positive than from the first screening but my piece still had a lot of work to be done on it before it even gets close to be considered 'good'. This is my first film so it is bound to be a process, for that reason I am sticking with a lot of what I have got and will try to improve upon these foundations. As said by my teacher, "loads of potential but dissapointing..."